My Special Doll

dollOne day I lost my doll. I was so sad because she was the first toy my Grandma gave me. I looked in the pool and I looked in the kitchen. I found my doll in the laundry! I forgot that I played with it outside. My mom had washed it because it was dirty.

~Written by Angelin

One thought on “My Special Doll

  1. I liked when you noticed that your doll was missing and that you looked and looked and then finally found her in the washed clothes. When you said you couldn’t find your doll made me keep on reading.This is a really good second grade story. I hope you make other great stories as great as this one.

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